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10
Feb

Toefl-ibt writing 例題



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How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.In 30minutes. It goes without saying that by moving our feelings movie or television influence people’s behavior. I have three reasons and examples to support my opinion. First, our moral or thought is affected by a catch copy which moving our feeling. For example, I was affected by this words “human who bully someone is not handsome man” when I was junior high school student. The catch copy which is advertised at CM make our moral change directly. Before I watch the CM, I thought that strong man is wright and can win others because I learn this notion from an anime TV show. However, this notion is changed by TV too. Because TV CM was watched by many people at the same time, Its words could become our standard words which everyone know than another media. TV and movie influence our behavior by changing our moral or thought. Second, our motivation is controlled by TV or movie too. The way is this these media use famous actor or actress to decide our motivation to buy some goods such as snack, drink, and car. For example whether you really need the drink, you want to drink it if you like the actor who advertise its drink. As you know, this is natural feeling like you learn to like the music which is loved by your lover. TV and movie influence our behavior by changing our motivation with famous persons. Third, our feeling is influenced by touching movie. When we hear great sounds and see touching story at the same time, you should be attracted to its contents. Some people could be changed their thought or sense of value. For example, almost all people ,even if they had positive thought to war, feel that war must be wrong after watch “IOUJIMANO TEGAMI” ,which depict the harsh war situation. TV and movie influence our behavior by making use of sounds and touching story. From these reasons, I think that by moving our feelings movie or television influence people’s behavior. 337Words bodyがどれも似たりよったり、、、正直このテーマは難しかったorz。 IntroとConclusion がいまいち。 bennkyou hajimari owar

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9
Feb

Toefl-ibt writing 例題!

If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.30minute It goes without saying that I change the accessibility of my home town. I have three reasons and some examples to support my opinion. First, plenty of way to move must improve our life. Because my home town is in rural city the way to go to grocery store is only car. As you can imagine, this is too inconvenient for especially elderly people and younger people who do not own car licence. By making station, bus and taxi company we easily can buy food, books, personal computer, TV game and so on. Then we can enjoy daily life. Second, by improving our city`s accessibility many people can come to our town. My home town has many hot springs which can cure some disease. This is very valuable and rare character compared to other hot springs. In spite of having this great advantage point, the visitor is only 200 thousands people per year. I think that this is because traveler can not come to our town easily. When it is winter, the heavy snow interrupt visitor`s way to our town. Therefore I guess that we can increase the number of visitor by making train which go to our town directly from urban city. Third, we can reduce emission of CO2 gas and cut the cost of gas by choose using train and bus. For example when three people go to grocery store with three car, we emit approximately three times amount of CO2 compared to situation with only one car. As you know, this is not reasonable though this actually occur in our town. However we can reduce the emission by using bus or train which can accommodate large number about 20 to hundreds people. Moreover we can reduce the use of gas from this. From these reasons, I want to change the accessibility of my home town. 310words 微妙。。。特に1つめのbodyがやばいな。

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